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		<title>Comment on The &#8216;Best&#8217; Thrillers, More from ThrillerFest by Simon Jameson</title>
		<link>http://farrellswords.com/2011/08/03/the-best-thrillers-more-from-thrillerfest/#comment-385</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Simon Jameson]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 08 Dec 2011 21:53:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Which would make a good film!? Heart of Darkness by Joseph Conrad]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Which would make a good film!? Heart of Darkness by Joseph Conrad</p>
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		<title>Comment on Author John Locke Sells 1 Million Kindle Books by What&#8217;s Going on in Publishing? &#171; Bruce Blake</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[What&#8217;s Going on in Publishing? &#171; Bruce Blake]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 22 Sep 2011 17:07:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[[...] Locke &#8211; the first self-published author to sell a million books - signs a traditional publishing deal with Simon &amp; Schuster. Ok, maybe it&#8217;s not exactly a [...]]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] Locke &#8211; the first self-published author to sell a million books &#8211; signs a traditional publishing deal with Simon &amp; Schuster. Ok, maybe it&#8217;s not exactly a [...]</p>
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		<title>Comment on The &#8216;Best&#8217; Thrillers, More from ThrillerFest by Farrell Kramer</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Farrell Kramer]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 05 Aug 2011 13:17:56 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Yes, that would be nice.  Do you have any favorites you&#039;d like to share?]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Yes, that would be nice.  Do you have any favorites you&#8217;d like to share?</p>
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		<title>Comment on The &#8216;Best&#8217; Thrillers, More from ThrillerFest by Vonnie</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Vonnie]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 04 Aug 2011 22:17:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Definitely agree with all of them, but would like to see some up and coming authors here as well.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Definitely agree with all of them, but would like to see some up and coming authors here as well.</p>
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		<title>Comment on The Importance of Subplot, More Notes from ThrillerFest by Vonnie</title>
		<link>http://farrellswords.com/2011/07/21/the-importance-of-subplot-more-notes-from-thrillerfest/#comment-368</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Vonnie]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 22 Jul 2011 22:44:15 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Thanks Farrell. Although it&#039;s something we know, we often lose sight of the importance of subplots.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks Farrell. Although it&#8217;s something we know, we often lose sight of the importance of subplots.</p>
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		<title>Comment on The Importance of Subplot, More Notes from ThrillerFest by Farrell Kramer</title>
		<link>http://farrellswords.com/2011/07/21/the-importance-of-subplot-more-notes-from-thrillerfest/#comment-367</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Farrell Kramer]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 21 Jul 2011 18:01:25 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[You&#039;re welcome, Ari.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>You&#8217;re welcome, Ari.</p>
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		<title>Comment on The Importance of Subplot, More Notes from ThrillerFest by Ari Meermans</title>
		<link>http://farrellswords.com/2011/07/21/the-importance-of-subplot-more-notes-from-thrillerfest/#comment-365</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Ari Meermans]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 21 Jul 2011 17:46:45 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Thanks again, Farrell, for posting your notes from ThrillerFest.  They&#039;re informative and I appreciate your taking the time to post them.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks again, Farrell, for posting your notes from ThrillerFest.  They&#8217;re informative and I appreciate your taking the time to post them.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Dissecting the Thriller, Notes from ThrillerFest by Farrell Kramer</title>
		<link>http://farrellswords.com/2011/07/13/dissecting-the-thriller-notes-from-thrillerfest/#comment-364</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Farrell Kramer]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 14 Jul 2011 01:45:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Not specifically, Ari.  But perhaps they got at this in the pacing discussion and the idea of adrenal fatigue.  

The panel discussed the need to create opportunities for the reader to take a breather, and then build back the tension again.  Humor was mentioned as one way to do this, but there were others.  Seems like this might solve the problem you are discussing.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Not specifically, Ari.  But perhaps they got at this in the pacing discussion and the idea of adrenal fatigue.  </p>
<p>The panel discussed the need to create opportunities for the reader to take a breather, and then build back the tension again.  Humor was mentioned as one way to do this, but there were others.  Seems like this might solve the problem you are discussing.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Dissecting the Thriller, Notes from ThrillerFest by Ari Meermans</title>
		<link>http://farrellswords.com/2011/07/13/dissecting-the-thriller-notes-from-thrillerfest/#comment-363</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Ari Meermans]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 14 Jul 2011 00:17:59 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Farrell, thanks for posting your notes from ThrillerFest.  I&#039;m jealous since I wasn&#039;t able to attend.

One of my pet peeves is the full-out gallop right up to the end of the book rather than letting the story end naturally and organically.  Sometimes, it&#039;s almost as if the author tired of the story and just wanted to finish it.  Was anything like this addressed?]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Farrell, thanks for posting your notes from ThrillerFest.  I&#8217;m jealous since I wasn&#8217;t able to attend.</p>
<p>One of my pet peeves is the full-out gallop right up to the end of the book rather than letting the story end naturally and organically.  Sometimes, it&#8217;s almost as if the author tired of the story and just wanted to finish it.  Was anything like this addressed?</p>
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		<title>Comment on Dissecting the Thriller, Notes from ThrillerFest by Farrell Kramer</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Farrell Kramer]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 13 Jul 2011 20:00:33 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Yes, I hate that myself.  Though the backstory dump at times has stopped me cold before I ever get to the end.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Yes, I hate that myself.  Though the backstory dump at times has stopped me cold before I ever get to the end.</p>
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